April Summary

Weordan:

Lots of rewriting this month. 

• Started the month by continuing to make my writing more active with attention on Balito’s scenes.  Did work on 4 scenes.
• Wrote a new scene in which Neltiar gives an explanation to Danielle.
• Eric and I talked about what motivations and moods each scene should have.  Did work to 20 of 26 scenes.
• Started work on a scene about investigating Biv.  Had to do some work on previous scenes to set it up.  Completely rewrote one scene from a different POV.

Market Stuff:

• Researched markets for Joanne.
• Did some work on rewriting Joanne’s cover letter.

Otherwise, no replies back, no ms out.
Other Writing:

• Free Writing: 22/30

This month was pretty much taken over by Divine Fire.  I didn’t get around to sending Joanne back out (which I should) or writing an AC article (which isn’t really a big deal).  Divine Fire should be my main concern.

May

• Fix the “Giddy” scene.  Finding some reading material that has some good giddy in it.
• I can’t imagine there’s more rewriting to be done (she says tempting fate) so at least three new scenes.
• Get Joanne out the door.
• Continue to do lots of active reading.