I was in the shower and I had an epiphany about Marie.
“Lightning has struck my brain!”
“That must have hurt…”
The novel should be in three parts with a prologue and epilogue. I’ve been trying to decide how to deal with the very different tones and POV throughout the book and what I need is this structure!
The thief in the night.
Establishing Marie, Neltiar, how Neltiar is going to change the course of Marie’s life.
Action I: The scouting (or maybe that’s in Part One), the raid, the aftermath.
The second raid, unmaskings, Michael’s death, the aftermath.
And yes, I was in such a hurry to get this down, concrete, that I am sitting here in front of the computer in a towel, my glasses, and my wedding ring…